Bare Vexed

Isabelle Kerr’s article identifies how the use of slang language in modern times is corrupting the use of traditional English. I agree with her that the excessive use of slang terms has become somewhat of an annoyance and that it is also interfering with our usual learning style in school. However, what I don’t agree is the way that Isabelle delivered her views but with a proper in depth look you can identify the point she is trying to get across.

Isabelle Kerr, a woman as young a herself would have some understanding of what modern language has become now. Some people would see her as a hypocrite for using slang terms in her own statement such as ‘we’re not all apathetic, ASBO-wielding yobs’ or other somewhat informal vocabulary such as ‘I had no idea what twerking was before all this kicked off’. But those comments would be from the real critics. Kerr is young and is a part of this generation so it is understandable why parts of some sentence structures would be different to that of someone who was writing from the perspective of a previous generation. She is trying to explain that even at her age she does not agree with the constant use of these slang terms as part of the traditional English language and she does give examples of other young people who agree with her; one saying ‘no wonder there is so much youth unemployment’ suggesting that it is because of slang terms youngsters are not giving off that great first impression in the interviews or they are fired because of the way they conduct themselves.

Another young Twitter follower said ‘what has the world come to?’ My response to this is that no one just decided to use slang terms in public just on the spot, all these terms are coming from some sort of media whether it is from T.V where Miley Cyrus twerked on T.V or words are picked up from viral videos online. People say these terms and do these actions just as a joke and no intention of it becoming a trend. The public would be the ones responsible for the use of these terms and actions seeing as how some people got a lot of attention like this they might be able to get the same kind of attention. Kerr says that words such as ‘twerk’ or ‘selfie’ have been added to online dictionaries, these dictionaries are the kinds that can be edited easily, however, that doesn’t mean everyone agrees with it. Some people prefer to stick with the traditional language and even now as I am writing this ‘twerk’ and ‘selfie’ are underlined as misspelt. Kerr is using the kind of vocabulary she is using because she is well-educated. This indicates that the kind of people who use slang terms are the kind of people who spend too much time watching T.V or going on the Internet and trying to find new ways to make themselves popular instead of focusing fully on their education.

Through my own education in English I discovered that there is an exception to the use of slang and that is Shakespeare who some can say was the King of slang. Shakespeare uses slang and shortens words to make his work original, however, when people here in the twenty-first century use slang it is considered as poor language. ‘Shakespeare will be turning in his grave’, the difference between Shakespeare and the people is that when he uses slang he uses it in way that makes it seem artistic and in most cases it’s to put on a good show. Now when ordinary people use slang it is simply to just make themselves sound cool and to make themselves popular or are simply too lazy to use the proper English term.

I agree with Isabelle Kerr’s statement that slang words and other non-traditional uses of vocabulary have become too much of a trend and that it is effecting the current and possibly future generation, the education system and has become somewhat of a plague in the English language. There is no actual useful benefit from using slang terms the way they are used now. To the current young generation the traditional English language might as well be a foreign language.

Remove the world’s masks and what do you see?

The world has evolved over the times, we now live in the world where we rely on technology and power. Society has grown to have many different people in it; rich, poor, powerful, weak, educated the list goes on and on. What if I told you that in fact that in the end there are only two types of people in this world. Money and technology are tools for people to use to survive in the world, some people get it after they work long hours for it I mean once upon a time children work their fingers to the bone twenty-four hours a day for only two cents. As for some other people, they might as well get it served on a silver platter. We rely so much on these essentials that they have become masks, masks that covers everyone in the world that form one mask altogether and this mask can be entitled as one thing, when you have money or technology or both you have power. The world is filled with people who build up their lives so they can get more power and the amount of power each person has is what separates the society.

What I want to ask you is that if our lives rely on power what happens when we all lose that power at once? I am talking about the failure of energy from power plants, banks running dry, no more money comes in from businesses and everything will fall. It would take a couple of days for people to take notice that their power is diminishing and when they do riots will spread with people demanding answers for what is happening. Incidents will rise resulting in casualties and hospitals being overrun by people seeking or even stealing medical essentials. Money wouldn’t mean a thing any more as people will begin scavenging for what they can find, no traffic goes in or out on roads sea or sky as this world’s ‘peacekeepers’ will try to contain the situation. As they block off people from the rest of the world, each part of the world descends into chaos and people will be left to fend for themselves with what they have and what they can find. After more days of containment people will start to lose hope and in the end they will as they will realise that no one on the outside will come and help and they probably can’t even if they tried. Governments won’t be able to help, the people with the most power sit there and do nothing but parade it, they will say that they will restore order but they still don’t do anything. Whether they like it or not they are a part of the society and if everyone lost their power eventually so will they, soon, they too will be consumed by the chaos and become in the same lifeboat as everyone else. Lifeboat rules where everyone makes decisions that allow them to live the longest, good luck politicians.

This is more or less how I see how society will collapse. I mentioned that the world is covered by a mask, remove that mask and I see a world with people who become who they really are, what humans are really are, this leads to they world really being separated in two different categories. Their will be people in the fallen society that will rise above others, these people will not become Noah and guide people out of the storm two by two instead these people will try to rebuild society and motivate people. This does not seem bad as a person steps up to take control, in reality, these people will take too much control. They will be the ones that will establish ‘new laws’ and when they realise that their society is getting crowded they will begin to find ways to establish crowd control, from exile to extreme cases of killing. These leaders will see people outside of their society as threats such as believing they are stealing their supplies. Do you think that people won’t be like this and I’m just getting this from movies and video games and that good people will become leaders, keep telling yourself that.

Let me tell how the mind works, the mind needs something to guide it otherwise it is just trying to figure what to do next and not coming to a conclusion. When that one person stands and calls himself leader the mind will begin to follow that person, it will know what to do as you will see that person as a sign of hope. Forget about your conscience and morals as that all goes out the window when the world goes to hell and you lose hope in the first place and it will take a while for it to come back,in some cases it might not come back, how long depends on how long you are willing to blindly follow this one person. This person would make the world seem like it’s getting better but behind close doors who knows how many strings they are pulling. Hope is a powerful thing for a person and for all that hope to fall onto one person, that person will have the power to manipulate together a society he can control. If the mind believes it is the only thing that has the power and people will follow the person, that person will shape things to the way he believe is right as every person believes they are right until they are proven wrong.

That is one type of person out of the two. Another type of person is part of a group the see the reality of the world and instead of turning it into their own fantasy they resort to what the human and all organisms have always done since the first sprout of life, survival. The human physiology adapts to the environment such as cold or heat, the mind also adapts even in a world that descended into chaos. People will focus on their own reality and realize that the world relied too much on its essentials and now they must walk through the burning streets of hell. Using their skills of survival they will adapt to the conditions and learn to survive the hell hole they are in, they can find others like them to stand a better chance at survival or they can help others who couldn’t find their hope and show them how they can survive the ravaged world. Some people might go at it alone but then the world will become even more dangerous and with no one to rely on, no one to help you pull you back to reality, the world will swallow you whole and drive you insane. People like this, the people who live reality will cross paths with the people who create a fantasy, the biggest battle of what is the right belief the world should follow will be carried out on the plains of hell, blood will be shed and ideals expressed or broken, realist vs. visionary.

Each person will try to convince the other is wrong and that the world should have someone to hold order people should not run around doing as they please in the name of survival or that the people should open their eyes to the true reality around them and not cling on to false hope as they would doom themselves to another hell controlled by another devil, a true clash of ideals. Removing the world’s masks and the world and its people will become who they truly are, people will follow their beliefs each believing they are doing the right thing that they are the good guy. However, in a world like this, is their really a good guy or a bad guy or is it just people doing what they think is right, that’s up to what you believe.

Satire Writing:Governments

Apparently, how the world works is that a group of people in each country come together and brainstorm ideas on how to make their country a better place for its citizens, what a whole load of rubbish. These people sit on their thrones and have their entire kingdom wrapped around its little finger. This is a world where power means everything, the more power you have, the higher in status you are and the more people who follow you.

It would be a bit of a stretch to say that Governments are like tyrants as they don’t have people slaving away at their feet. Government cover themselves in a shroud of righteousness saying that every decision made is for the good of the people and will ensure a better future. Imagine if that future involved society plunging into chaos, no real action from the Government will actually be taken just meaningless statements and empty promises. They say they make society better, apparently this involves extra funding towards armed forces to continue a war instead of the extra funding going towards actually helping people through medical care, education or even helping people through charities.

If they want to support armed forces they should simply send supplies to keep them going and focus on bringing them home and being more defensive, not sending more people and weapons giving enemies more reasons to fight back. Where does the money even come from, it comes from the people, they suck dry the very people they ensured they would aid. We pay for all essentials, medical, education, food, our homes and even our cars and all that money goes straight into their back pockets.

The way they see it is that they ensure order and if we want to carry on with our lives in their society then we must make a ‘small donation’. What kind of order do they even set up. Let me tell you what they did, they wrote down the law, all the rules for their society and that was that, no changes what so ever. They issue law enforcement to uphold these laws but that doesn’t stop the criminal network. They do not go in-depth with investigations which result in the crime system working underground, crime is everywhere and what do they do as a response add more laws that make no difference except annoy the public and detain and release caught criminals.

Justice is never delivered. These big wigs use their provided power to cut themselves out of the reality and do what they believe is right to shape it even though there is never any change, all that power and they do nothing with it. This is how the world is run but the world can do so much better with the right guidance.

Final: Then and Now: Island Culture, Day and Night

I wake to the rays of warmth cracking through the open shutters illuminating my face. I explored the emptiness of my home as everyone else went to enjoy the serenity that the island offers. During the day I take a stroll down a silent path surrounded by endless woodland, through the trees the scent of fresh buttery goodness seeps through attracting people to buy the freshly made bread. I continue along the path with my mind entirely focused on the cast plain of aquatic tranquility the rest of my family make our way as soon as they’re ready hoping to get a good spot where we could get colored underneath the light of the world. It’s always a hustle and bustle as the entire coastline, even on the other side of the island gets filled with people very quickly. My uncle and I would take the boat and make out way across the sea to another nearby island, the beauty of the day , is that the sun is glistens off the water and giving everyone a perfect view of the aqua colored seafloor. I immerse myself in magical atmosphere and lose myself. Laughter scatters indicating everyone having fun, throwing balls around and jumping in the water.  A prolonged sigh of sensation is produced as the water refreshes me due to it being a perfect temperature. This place is a realm of tranquility where all stress and depression is relieved and you just let yourself go. All of these people are immersed in their own things, not interacting with other groups or families. That is one of this place’s cultures; a perfect environment to relax and forget any problems. When lunchtime comes I am always excited. Everyone does sort of the same thing which is throwing a family barbecue. the fresh scent of homemade barbecue contaminates the air of the town attracting all to a feast of the ages.  The fresh caught fish are cooked to a point when you can smell the nicely done crisp layer down to the soft meat center. The fire burning bullied my face with the heat and I heard the crackling of the wood and paper. We would then sit around the table and start picking out the fish we wanted to eat, passed around any extras and then dug in. Never did I eat a meal when the food is so freshly cooked and tastes perfectly crispy on the outside and soft and warm on the inside. The meal had been devoured and sat around having enjoyed dining like gods. Most people just stay at home and some people would go back down to the beach, although, the sun would not be as scorching as it was in the middle of the day. A day like this is rewarded with a time to sit and meditate on my thoughts as I rested on a rock on beach and witness the sky burn a fiery orange as the sun fades over the aquatic horizon also having leaving a trailed reflection on the water’s face. A true sight to behold.

The sky transforms as the fiery orange fades to a deep blue to match the sea. Lights burn in the sky clearly visible and illuminates the night sky. My family and I would head down into town and before we even get to the end of the street we would hear music, laughter and a lot of fun coming from the marina. Crowds gather along the water’s edge to enjoy the endless festivities every night, comrades reunite and new ones are formed as they rejoice over freshly caught and cooked sea food and beers. We go further into town where we would go to our favorite local restaurant. We always order either fried calamari with chips or the four cheese pizza which are both incredible. The smell and taste of the food is always fresh and never leaves a bad taste in your mouth. Music fill the streets only to be drowned out by the laughter and sing alongs to local bands or karaoke. As you sit there you notice everything around you. Everyone is communicating with everyone, as for the younglings, we immerse ourselves in the warm feeling of night swimming and show our enthusiasm in the form of competitiveness over a fair game of pool or street football. Sometimes the bar gets packed when there is a game on and they always tense. At this time there are parties all along the coast and if you are quiet you can hear the never-ending party going on the other side of the island. We bid farewell to the night by retreating to our home where we say goodnight to our neighbours and lay, sleep and wait for the next day as we get to enjoy it all over again. The point I am trying to make is that there is a second culture to the island, a culture that you have to experience yourself to understand the feeling. It is a time where I’d rather be nowhere else. Everyone is connected with a random person and has fun with each other. The night becomes a whole party that no one ever forgets and this is why the night is different from the day, it is because everyone comes together rather than just pass by each other without a second glance. It is places like this where my greatest memories are carved on my own road and I would stop to see them again any day.

Touching the void Practice question


‘It felt as if there were something deliberate about it, something preordained by a bored and evil force.’ This is a quote from the perspective of Simon not long after he believed Joe to be dead. In this context, Simon uses the phrase evil force as a metaphor to describe the dangerous atmosphere that is the mountain. Simon is enraged that the ‘evil force’ was toying with them because after all the trekking, climbing and surviving the storm, the mountain and the constant danger the evil force decided it was ‘bored’ and try to take Joe’s life and suck him right into the ‘void’. Simon believed that this whole mission was not going to go completely well and that he knew something bad was going to happen which took the form of him losing his partner to the ‘evil force’ that is this very mountain. Believing in these dark forces posses as a danger to both Simon and Joe psychologically as it will result in misjudgment and can lead to their will to go on to diminish. However, Joe does not believe in these evil forces as he says on page 141 ‘There were no dark forces acting against me’ meaning he is out of the danger of psychological damage and he can find the strength to get crawl out of any dangers he is in because he knows if there were evil forces he would be dead already.

‘It felt as if there were something deliberate about it, something preordained by a bored and evil force.’ This is a quote from the perspective of Simon not long after he believed Joe to be dead. In this context, Simon uses the phrase evil force as a metaphor to describe the traitorous atmosphere that is the mountain. Simon is enraged that ‘evil force’ was toying with them because after all the trekking, climbing and surviving the storm the mountain takes Joe  in a way that can only be perceived as simply unlucky. Simon believed that this whole mission was not going to go completely well and that he new something bad was going to happen which took the form of him losing his partner to the ‘evil force’ that is this very mountain. another reference to the forces was made by Joe on page 141 where he believed ‘dark forces’ were conspiring against as if they were trying to get him killed.

‘A voice in my head told me that this was true’. After the event of Joe falling into the crevice He started to make his way down, However, he was alone and he believed was is one mis-step away from death. The paranoia started to get to him and he started going crazy, so far as he began to hear voices in his head. He described two voices i his head; one that was telling him to accept the reality and situation he was in and the other was bringing him images and memories like a day dream similar to the idea that before death you see your entire life flash before your eyes. This is a similar situation to having an angel and demon version of yourself floating around your head, in Joe’s case, one was telling him to face reality and continue and try to survive while the other is telling him to face the reality that he won’t make and he should let go. The voice is the mental argument Joe is having with himself when he is trying to decide how to continue.

 

 

 

Antihero-Pirates of the Caribbean-Captain Jack Sparrow

So many ways you can describe Captain Jack Sparrow: eccentric, irresponsible, a drunk, a lady’s man or in some cases the worst pirate alive. Jack himself is more of a wondering free spirit that simply goes wherever the wind takes him and his marvellous brig The Black Pearl’.He is not the kind of person to cal heroic as he seems to blindly sail his ship and his crew into all sorts of dangers such as the British Navy, Davy Jones or even a kraken. He likes to sit back with a bottle of rum watching people and learning about them and when he sees the opportunity, he manipulates people to get what he wants. even when other people try to play him he is somehow one step ahead and when he is actually cornered he finds a way to escape, even when he has an entire island tribe chasing him for being a false prophet. On top of that, Jack likes to steal, or how he sees it as picking up souvenirs, and not give a care and not focus on it he just simply walks next to takes your ring and leaves.

The level of respect and loyalty between him and his crew is questionable as even though they listen to his orders perfectly considering they always manage to get out of a storm unscathed and they were even willing to capsize the ship to solve a riddle on a chart. However, some of the members of the crew have made past attempts to kill him and Elizabeth Swann even left him tied on his ship and she and the rest of the crew of the Black Pearl left him for dead by the hands, or tentacles, of the kraken to which he was sent to Davy Jones Locker. Loyalty to the captain is still up in the air but their are aspects to him the can be hailed as good. For example, even though he manipulates people he does what he can to stay out of a fight and he does not really kill people, even in a bar fight he just gabbed a bottle and walks out. He fights really only when he has to when his life is threatened. As a captain, Jack’s methods are questionable but never in any situation did his antics get his crew killed or his ship sunk, only the betrayal of his crew, meaning his is somewhat loyal to his crew and wants to ensure a future as free men on the open seas. The most heroic action Jack has done would probably be in ‘At World’s End’ where he was given a chance to be immortal by stabbing Davy Jones’ heart and becoming the new captain of the Flying Dutchman. It was his dream, one that he was chasing all his life, the ability to sail the seven seas for eternity, however, Jacks conscience got the better of him and as his friend, Will Turner, laid dead he placed the knife in his hand and stabbed the heart. HE killed the Davy Jones, saved all his crew and the Black Pearl and he gave up his dream to save his friend and ensuring the everlasting love of him and Elizabeth. So while respect and loyalty and his actions remain questionable, Jack is still an honourable pirate and he continues his adventure not regretting any of his actions.

gotta have faith right

‘There’s so many stories where some brave hero decides to give their life to save the day and because of their sacrifice, the good guys win, the survivors cheer and everybody lives happily ever after’.

‘But the hero… never gets to see that happy ending. They’ll never know if the day was really saved and that everyone lived on their lives happy. They either sacrifice themselves or they just leave without saying a word, they don’t stick around for some thankful gesture because they know they are needed elsewhere, they know that somewhere else people need help that they need a hero. so they simply leave and they won’t know how it all turned out. In the end… they just gotta have faith and hope it was all worth it’.

Antihero-Non-Fiction-Portal 24-Time Travel

One of the themes of Meredith Stroud’s ‘Portal 24’ is time travel and while the idea of how it works is not further developed throughout the novel, it is still somewhat explained. The concept of time travel is a non-fiction aspect and when used in a fiction novel, how it is described is based on actual theories. ‘Think of how fast Earth spins, how fast it moves around the sun, and how fast the sun moves around the centre of the galaxy’, this is the beginning line of how a character explains how time travel works for the main character. The portal they use projects an energy field that compensates for the Earth’s trajectory thus reversing that very trajectory for anyone in the field sending them back in time twenty-four hours. However, this field creates a tear in the space-time continuum so not only are they being dropped somewhere else in time but also in another location while also generating a few smaller portals to allow easy access back to the modern time. All the characters stress the fact that they have to return to the portal before the twenty-four hour limit, why, they do not actually know. The last person who didn’t make it back just disappeared and they could never figure out how or why so to avoid the situation they list ii as a top priority to make it back on time. The concept of how time-travel works in this novel projects the idea of the theme itself being anti-heroic. The ability itself is a gift to the world, the ability to go back and correct catastrophic events, however, at the cost of having a limited time and if failed the first time than it is game over and no second chances. Time-travel is the most explored theory in history and when finally given a chance to use you realise how dangerous it is. There is no controlling time no matter if it is the past or present, time doesn’t control us either it just watches us, it sees the actions we take now that can affect the future. It does so again when going back and watches the characters change the present but this time it does take action and chases the characters and either they catch up to their own time or time catches up to them. Anti-heroism in its own right; time travel to save the present or be lost in time forever.

Touching the Void: Chapter 6, 7, 8 Summary

Simon and Joe continued to make a hasty decent down the mountain with Simon believing they are not that far anymore. Joe’s leg is badly injured so they continued their lowering system. As Joe was getting lowered he noticed that the cliff face started getting steeper till he feels like he’s sliding off the mountain, he starts yelling for Simon but he couldn’t hear him, he tried digging his axe into the ice but it wouldn’t break, before too long Joe slips off the cliff and is left dangling in the air 6 feet away from the cliff edge. He tried to reach the cliff and climb the rope but he couldn’t do it. Simon could feel Joe hanging off the cliff, he tried to pull him up but he too started slipping. realising he cannot help Joe and he can’t help himself Simon’s sense of survival lead him to cut the rope with his knife dropping Joe believing to have killed him. Trying to cope with all that is happened, Simon dug a snow cave and slept except he couldn’t. In the morning Simon continued his decent alone highly dehydrated.

The chapter picks up when Joe was still dangling off the cliff right at the moment when Simon cuts the rope and he falls. Joe lands on snow slips where he continues to fall further into the crevasse beneath him till he hits his head and land on an ice bridge sticking out. Due to frostbite he could not proper attach himself to the ice wall. He sat there trying not to laugh hoping that Simon fell with him and that he his holding on at the top of the crevasse. He found out that the rope was cut and decided to go to sleep crying. He is now in the void which is what delivers the title as he is surrounded by darkness. As he woke up he takes action and as he cannot climb up so he screwed his rope down and began to abseil down.

Simon descended down the mountain enough to see where Joe has fell from the cliff. He agreed to himself that Joe must have died and if he survived he wonders how. He then goes on to think how other people will respond to the news and how he is going to tell the story. He walks up to the crevasse thinking if he should go down and look for Joe but he does not have enough rope and he his already too exhausted to try and he already believes Joe didn’t survive. He tried calling out his name but no on responded, this let Simon traumatised of what he’d done. He climbed down the rest of the mountain still wondering what is going to happen when he tells everyone what has happened. He considered not telling the story but When he finally reunited with Richard he just told the whole story. Simon then lays down and gets a proper sleep.

Touching the Void: Chapter 5 Summary

Both the climbers are feeling fatigued and are frustrated as in the 6 hours of decent, they have only managed 1000ft even though they were hoping to get to the bottom already. Disaster struck as when Joe was trying to climb down a cliff he fell down and broke his leg, he was really frustrated and angry. It was at this moment Joe started thinking to himself that he would not be able to make it down this mountain so he accepted the fact that he his dead as he doesn’t think Simon would come back for him. Simon eventually found him but Joe still doesn’t believe they are team and that they are not getting down together. Simon had a moment of thought where he hoped Joe fell so then he could make it down the mountain easier on his own and not bare the responsibility of looking out for him. Simon stayed any way as considering that they are both still alive they might as well get down together. He came up with a plan that involves using a 300ft (two 150ft ropes) and lower each other down the mountain with Simon lowering him considering Joe can’t climb. However, Joe’s attitude hasn’t changed and still believes he is dead.

Touching the Void: Chapter 4 Summary

Both climbers are beginning to realise the imminent danger they dragged themselves into. As Joe desperately holds on to Simon he too slips and takes a minor plummet, both climbers just barely escaped their untimely fates. They eventually get their bearings and make way to a ridge to dig another snow cave, in this time Simon notices clearly that he did get frostbite in his fingers and gets agitated with Joe for taking so long with the digging. As the two rest up, Simon recalls a time when they were climbing with two other Japanese climbers but unfortunately they fell to their deaths, this gets both of them worried as they might meet the same fate. As the two woke up in somewhat of a positive attitude, they prepared for the hopefully quick decent, Simon’s frostbite worsens and the two used up their last gas canister. Just as they set of Joe just narrowly avoided another collapse of cornice, they begin to make haste with both their moods as low as the temperature.